• Yoponot
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    22:48, July 15, 2016

    I have a plot idea for the third episode of Ben 10: Ghostly Future but I'm not sure if I want to go through with it or not.

    Ben, Max and Rook pursue Zs'Skayr, this part I am definite on.

    But I am deciding on wether or not, during the pursuit, Ben's Omnitrix will somehow break and Ben will be stuck with fusion aliens. I have put the aliens into groups, which the Omnitrix will switch through and combine random aliens in the group.

    First Set: Heatblast, Wildmutt, Diamondhead, XLR8, Grey Matter, Four Arms, Stinkfly, Ripjaws, Upgrade, Cannonbolt

    Second Set: Wildvine, Blitzwolfer, Snare-oh, Frankenstrike, Upchuck, Ditto, Eye Guy, Way Big, Feedback

    Third Set: Swampfire, Echo Echo, Humongosaur, Big Chill, Chromastone, Brainstorm, Spidermonkey, Goop, Lodestar, Rath.

    Fourth Set: Water Hazard, Ampfibian, Armodrillo, Terraspin, NRG, Shocksquatch, Eatle, Clockwork, Jury Rigg, Nanomech

    Fitfth Set: Bloxx, Gravattack, Crashhopper, Articiguana, Ball Weevil, Kickin Hawk, Astrodactyl, Buzzshock, Atomix, Gutrot.

    I like the idea, but it might be too much and the amount of time it would take to request drawings of each of them (I am stuck on my phone due to my computer being broken) would be phenomenal.

    Please state wether or not I should go with it.

    Thank you!

    EDIT: Moved Feedback to second section.

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    • Fusions are a bit overused and overrated. The group sets are also series by series with the second set being additional alien. Cannonbolt just replaces Ghostfreak and Nanomech should be in the third set. Feedback also chronologically (unless you want him in OV's group set for debuting there) belongs in the second set. And what about the Outbreak aliens? 

      Don't go with it probably. It'll be really hard, time-consuming, and there's no benefit of having an additional plot you have to worry about.

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    • Ok. I will decide today. Also, I categorised aliens based on their series, but I skipped undesirable aliens. Also, I skipped Ghostfreak on purpose, because it would be dumb to have Ghostfreak vs Ghostfreak (Zs' Skayr) because Zs'Skayr could just possess Ben. Also, 10 aliens for each set, hence why Nanomech isn't in the Third one.

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    • Arctiguana would also chronologically fit into the second set. While 11 year old Ben never uses him on-screen, we do see OV young Kevin's fusion being 1/11th arctiguana.

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    • But the fifth set has 11. And I missed Arctiguana. Rocks or any other off screen alien could fit into the third set and Spitter despite never being used is most likely the second.

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    • I wasn't doing it chronologically. Go onto the alien list on BTP and I pretty much categorised them based on order there, not putting some for my own reasons and I wasn't sure about Nanomech, but put him in at the end.

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    • Spitter, rocks, and squidstrictor were never used by present day Ben, so the could reasonably be included in any set. Second if you believe the words of DJW like gospel, or fifth/sixth set otherwise. Same with ventrillosquid, decagon vreedle, and portaller

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    • I said I skipped some for my own reasons.

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    • @PrimalFan It does? I'll fix that.

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    • Fixed! Also it doesn't matter what sets they are in that is just an example, I can change the content of the sets and I probably will. Just tell me if you think it's a good idea or not please.

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    • I personally dislike fusions for being overused, overrated, and have no purpose.

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    • Ok. I will decide after we have more 'votes'. Also, that means you won't like my series because Episode 1 features Ben 10,000 using XLR8 + ChamAlien, and Episode two features Zs'Skayr absorbing Galvanic Mechamorph DNA, though this is reverted by this episode.

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    • CreeperDNA wrote:
      Ok. I will decide after we have more 'votes'. Also, that means you won't like my series because Episode 1 features Ben 10,000 using XLR8 + ChamAlien, and Episode two features Zs'Skayr absorbing Galvanic Mechamorph DNA, though this is reverted by this episode.

      I like some fusions (though Dissip8 personally isn't all that great), but I'm not a big fan of it. I can mind a few fusions across a series, or even Yam-I-Oh (Or however it is named) where fusions are actually a plotline.

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    • Ok.

      PrimalFan wrote:


      You read my thing? Thanks!

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    • Though I rushed with Dissip8 and that's why he's not all that great.

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    • Yeah, Episode 1 and 2 were okay. I think it could be a bit better though. I like the novel-esque format though, a lot more creative than some series.

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    • Thank you, but I only put an extract from Episode 2 on, the rest will be uploaded either today or tomorrow.

      I agree that it could be better, as this is my first series ever which is why I want feedback (geddit?). Aaronbill3 helped me with this by changing some of the things in the extract. I even have a post asking for more writers/co-writers.

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    • Personally I think that fussions can be done well, especially if they aren't treated as the be-all end-all of Omnitrix functions. From what I read of the extract, I think Zs'skayr-o-morph is done VERY well.

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    • Thank you. I will probably upload the rest of C2 (Offically named Final Destination) tomorrow, though it needs some serious upgrading (I'm not sorry)!

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    • I have decided and this thread will not be open for replies.

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