I have a plot idea for the third episode of Ben 10: Ghostly Future but I'm not sure if I want to go through with it or not.
Ben, Max and Rook pursue Zs'Skayr, this part I am definite on.
But I am deciding on wether or not, during the pursuit, Ben's Omnitrix will somehow break and Ben will be stuck with fusion aliens. I have put the aliens into groups, which the Omnitrix will switch through and combine random aliens in the group.
First Set: Heatblast, Wildmutt, Diamondhead, XLR8, Grey Matter, Four Arms, Stinkfly, Ripjaws, Upgrade, Cannonbolt
Second Set: Wildvine, Blitzwolfer, Snare-oh, Frankenstrike, Upchuck, Ditto, Eye Guy, Way Big, Feedback
Third Set: Swampfire, Echo Echo, Humongosaur, Big Chill, Chromastone, Brainstorm, Spidermonkey, Goop, Lodestar, Rath.
Fusions are a bit overused and overrated. The group sets are also series by series with the second set being additional alien. Cannonbolt just replaces Ghostfreak and Nanomech should be in the third set. Feedback also chronologically (unless you want him in OV's group set for debuting there) belongs in the second set. And what about the Outbreak aliens?
Don't go with it probably. It'll be really hard, time-consuming, and there's no benefit of having an additional plot you have to worry about.
Ok. I will decide today. Also, I categorised aliens based on their series, but I skipped undesirable aliens. Also, I skipped Ghostfreak on purpose, because it would be dumb to have Ghostfreak vs Ghostfreak (Zs' Skayr) because Zs'Skayr could just possess Ben. Also, 10 aliens for each set, hence why Nanomech isn't in the Third one.
I wasn't doing it chronologically. Go onto the alien list on BTP and I pretty much categorised them based on order there, not putting some for my own reasons and I wasn't sure about Nanomech, but put him in at the end.
Spitter, rocks, and squidstrictor were never used by present day Ben, so the could reasonably be included in any set. Second if you believe the words of DJW like gospel, or fifth/sixth set otherwise. Same with ventrillosquid, decagon vreedle, and portaller
Ok. I will decide after we have more 'votes'. Also, that means you won't like my series because Episode 1 features Ben 10,000 using XLR8 + ChamAlien, and Episode two features Zs'Skayr absorbing Galvanic Mechamorph DNA, though this is reverted by this episode.
CreeperDNA wrote: Ok. I will decide after we have more 'votes'. Also, that means you won't like my series because Episode 1 features Ben 10,000 using XLR8 + ChamAlien, and Episode two features Zs'Skayr absorbing Galvanic Mechamorph DNA, though this is reverted by this episode.
I like some fusions (though Dissip8 personally isn't all that great), but I'm not a big fan of it. I can mind a few fusions across a series, or even Yam-I-Oh (Or however it is named) where fusions are actually a plotline.
Thank you, but I only put an extract from Episode 2 on, the rest will be uploaded either today or tomorrow.
I agree that it could be better, as this is my first series ever which is why I want feedback (geddit?). Aaronbill3 helped me with this by changing some of the things in the extract. I even have a post asking for more writers/co-writers.
Personally I think that fussions can be done well, especially if they aren't treated as the be-all end-all of Omnitrix functions. From what I read of the extract, I think Zs'skayr-o-morph is done VERY well.