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Max X
Season 1, Episode 1
Written by Maximus Loo2012
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Plot[]

Galvan Mark II

(Khyber): Hmm...(runs towards Azmuth's lab)

(Derrick J Wyatt, talking to other Galvans): And this is the Galvan pride and joy after the Omnitrix. The Proto-Tool! First wielded by expert marksman Rook Blonko....

(Khyber): Pride and joy? (knocks the Galvans out and takes the Proto-Tool)(runs out)

3 hours later, on the Cerebroustacean home planet

(Dr Psychobos): Our contract is completed. You get the Nemematrix, that inferior device and I take the Proto-Tool! And destroy the brainchild of Azmuth's, the Omnimatrix!

(Khyber): Mm hmmm. (takes the Nemetix and runs out)

(Dr Psychobos): And n-n-now... The Axis Tool shall be created by m-m-me! Muahahahahahah!

1 year later, on a ship

(Dr Psychobos): Vilgax. Your Axis Tool.

(Vilgax): Wonderful.

(Plumber): You have breached Plumber code X3261! Surrender now!

(Vilgax): Let's try this out! (fires a hyper powerful blast)

(Plumber): What? (an explosion occurs and the Axis Tool drops behind a pillar)

(Vilgax):(attempts to pick it up)

(Plumber, revealed to be alive): Hah! (fires a blast, sending Vilgax to outer space)(attacks Dr Psychobos and defeats him)

(Dr Psychobos): Noo! (he is led away by Plumbers)

(Plumber): Another job well done! (the camera focuses on his name tag, revealing he is Maximus Loo, ace Plumber)

THEME SONG
Maximus's home, 3 months later

(Maximus): Nothing but a cup of hot chocolate on a Saturday morning!

Beep beep beep beep

(Maximus, looking at Plumber badge): Yes, Magister Maxwell?

(Magister Max, on Plumber badge hologram): You are sent on a mission to the Van Allen Belt to store an asteroid containing large amounts of taedenite.

(Maximus): So much for my vacation. (grabs Axis Tool) Solo mission, Magister?

(Magister Max): You are going with Ben 10.

(Maximus): Wow......

(Magister Max): Undertown base, Maximus. Over and out.

(Maximus): Awesome. (presses a few buttons on Axis Tool and teleports away)

Plumber base, Undertown

(Maximus): Ben 10!

(Ben): Ace Plumber Max, eh?

(Rook): I am pleased to make your acquaintance, Maximus.

(Maximus): Hi, guys!

(Rook): Your device is similar to mine. (shows Proto-Tool)

(Maximus): Dr Psychobos made it. Copied from the Proto-Tool.

(Rook): That scum!

(Ben): Cut it. Get to the ship.

They walk to the ship

(Maximus): Cool ship.

(Ben): Yeah.

(Maximus, while turning it on): Blast off in T Minus 8 seconds.

(Ben): Awesome.

15 hours later

(Ben): I am totshally geshing mosion shicknesh....(walks to back of cabin) I need some milk. (pours a cup, drinks it and goes to washroom)

Boom!

(Rook): Bad news. (Runs to washroom and destroys it) Oh no.

Ben as Astrodactyl is fending off several aliens who have destroyed the wall.

(Maximus): Argh! (uses Axis Tool to create a spacesuit for himself, with Rook doing the same)

They jump out of the ship

(Charterer): Do not come closer. Or I shall destroy you.

(Rook, whispering): They have acid powers.

(Maximus): I don't care! (blasts them)

One Charterer, carrying Ben, is alive

(Charterer): Do not come closer or I shall kill the boy.

(Maximus): Uh...(kills the Charterer) Yes!

The Charterer kills Ben

(Rook): No!

(Max): Ben...I...

(Rook): (bows his head towards Ben) My regards...(points to Max) You! You killed him.

(Max): I'm sorry...I...

(Rook): There is no point...

Azmuth teleports in

(Max): Azmuth.

(Azmuth): I have news.

(Rook): What kind.

(Azmuth): To the human.

(Max): Yes?

(Azmuth): You are Maxwell Tennyson's illegtimate grandson

(Max): Bu..wha...duh..Oh my gosh...

(Azmuth): Thus, you can wield the Omnitrix.

(Max): (puts on the Omnitrix)

The Omnitrix recalibrates, with simply the top part dropping

(Max): You aliens! (transforms into....)

(Arcticguana): Uh....Arcticguana?

(Rook): That is what Ben calls him, although I like FreezeLizard better.

(Arcticguana): Lamo. (freezes a ship of Charterers)

(Charterers): Aaaah! (jump down from their ship)

(Rook): Hah! (fires his Proto-Tool)

(Charterers): There is a reason why we are not humans! (their shadows separate from them esque horror movie, grabbing Arcticguana and Rook)

(Arcticguana): Oh no! I can't freeze these guys! Oh, yeah. (transforms)

(Heatblast): Take on the light! (fires at them)

(Charterers): Nuuuuuuu! (run away)

(Heatblast): This guy rocks!

Earth, during a funeral

(Max): Ben....

(Rook, on the stage giving a speech): Although he had many disgusting eating habits, weird language, a mild psychotic nature which does not show occasionally, bad health habits, the act of delaying and many others, Ben was a great hero. (walks off the stage)

(Max): ... I....

(Mayor, on the stage): Ben saved the world so may times...but we took it for granted....

Gwen walks in

(Gwen): You! (points at Max)

(Max): Huh!?

(Gwen): You killed Ben! (picks him up with mana)

(Max): This calls for destructive measures! (transforms)

(Goop): A Polymorph! Who cares about the species anyway! (melts Gwen's mana) Stop attacking, I don't want to hurt you!

(Gwen): Well, I'm just repaying the favour! (pulls his anti-gravity projector apart)

(Goop, detransforming): You...stink!

(Max): I didn't kill Ben.

(Gwen): Don't mention "kill Ben"! (fires at the Omnitrix)

(Max): Want to play it the hard way? Then let's go! (transforms)

(Rath): LEMME TELL YOU SOMETHING, GWENDOLYN TENNYSON! YOU NO TRY TO BLAST RATH WHEN RATH IS ALSO IN BADDY MOODY!

(Gwen): You aren't as exciting as Ben, so stop the witty talk! (uses her mana and pushes Rath backwards)

(Rath): YOU NO PUSH RATH, YOU BIG BULLY! (slashes Gwen, who deflects it)

(Gwen): Ugh!

Khyber appears

(Khyber): Oh, a new Omnitrix wielder.

(Max): Khyber.

(Gwen): I'll take care of you later! (attacks Khyber)

(Khyber): That foolish Levin. He dares take my dog! But I have a new pet! (unleashes a creature-a tiger)

(Max): Whoa...(transforms) I'm getting the hang of this!

(Waybig): Wow!

(Khyber's Tiger): Rooooar! (transforms)

(Acidfire): Azi! (spits a mouthful of acid)

(Waybig): Just like that Acidbreath! (dodges the shot)(fires a cosmic ray)

(Khyber): Oh...(climbs up Waybig)

(Waybig): Ooh, eeh! That tickles!

(Khyber): Not anymore! (fires his sniper rifle at Waybig's fin)

(Waybig, detransforming): No!

(Gwen): Weakling! (fires a mana blast at Khyber)

(Khyber): Aah! I shall have to strike when he is alone! (escapes)

Gwen helps Max up

(Max): Thanks.

(Gwen): Don't think I forgave you yet. (walks off)

(Rook): We shall avenge Ben.

(Max): Ben...

Chimerian Hammer

(Vilgax): Ben Tennyson has died, leaving it to a rookie. This is the perfect time to take the Omnitrix! Buahahahahahahahah!

(Psyphon): And you have a secret weapon, Master Vilgax.

THE END

Characters[]

  • Maximus Loo
  • Benjamin Kirby Tennyson
  • Rook Blonko
  • Derrick J Wyatt

Aliens Used[]

By Ben[]

  • Astrodactyl
  • Chromastone

By Maximus[]

  • Arcticguana
  • Heatblast
  • Goop
  • Rath

By Khyber's Tiger[]

  • Acidfire

Villains[]

  • Khyber
  • Dr Psychobos
  • Vilgax
  • Charterers
  • Gwen (partially)
  • Khyber's Tiger
  • Psyphon
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