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"Unusual names?" *gets shot*"[]

Speedygal landed on the planet of Pilot Pizza Party, where the characters names were odd and strange, but quite unigue to the face of BTFF since this has not been seen. EVER.The character's teacher sorta can remind you of the Invader Zim Teacher, but more silly and ready to bribe a student into learning.

Dressed up in a puffy dress with a George Washington Wig is certianly funny,expecially when all the students get into the costume to start cleaning except the teacher. Now this can entertain a person into laughing out loud.

The days passing by with a character in space, seemed boring, until a Character broke the fourth wall by saying "You forgot to skip a week" which broke the streak of boredomness between the reader AND the character waiting to see what happens next.

The ending is humerous,the middle greatly made, and the starting point brought you into a whole new world series of...Pizza Party!


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