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This is the third episode of OmniSins. It's about Trouble Helix, which is almost entirely a flashback back when Ben was still ten, err I mean eleven. Unfortunately for him and us, the past holds the greatest sins.

       EVERYTHING WRONG WITH TROUBLE HELIX

IN INDEFINITE WORDS OR LESS

Spoilers!

(Duh)

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[Sin 1]: *Blukic and Driba argue* These arguments bring back so much memories from the annoying fights between Ben and Gwen..

[Sin 2]: *Chromastone reverts back to Ben* No! Don't leave me Chromastone! I'll never see you again..quite literally.

[Sin 3]: Cannonbolt: Argh! Why did we hire you guys again? Narrator: Wait, the Plumbers had hired them BEFORE?! There are millions of Galvans out there and they picked those two?

[Sin 4]: *Theme song plays*

[Sin 5]: Made by Man of Action.

[Sin 6]: Art Director: Derrick J. Wyatt.

[Sin 7]: *We see Galvan Prime for the first time in OV* Where did all the epic futuristic technological stuff go?

[Sin 8]: *Max appears* Everyone, look for Max's eyes! He lost them again!

[Sin 9]: Azmuth: Albaydo, modify power cycles. Narrator: His name is ALBEDO for goodness sake!

[Sin 10]: *Max hits his head in the ceiling*

[Sin 11]: *XLR8 checks Azmuth's inventions* XLR8 was never annoying before..

[Sin 12]: Azmuth: Not my concern. Narrator: He was less of a jerk in Alien Force and Ultimate Alien.

[Sin 13]: *Malware absorbs the Galvan Guard's armor* Seriously, that guard had it coming.

[Sin 14]: *Malware smashes some houses* Malware is a jerk to small houses.

[Sin 15]: Malware: Azmuth! I am coming for you! (Later) Malware: The Omnitrix! I want it! Narrator: Wait, do you want Azmuth or the Omnitrix? Make up your mind, dude.

[Sin 16]: *The Omnitrix recharges and Ben transforms into Four Arms* Again, the Omnitrix recharges in just a few seconds instead of a few minutes..

[Sin 17]: *Four Arms throws Malware through some buildings and then throws him to Azmuth's Tower* Turns out Four Arms is an even bigger jerk to houses.

[Sin 18]: Albedo: Ha ha! A creature of your low intellect could never understand its workings to operate it. Narrator: You don't want to tick off Malware..

[Sin 19]: *Malware absorbs Albedo into his hand* See? That's why you should never tick him off!

[Sin 20]: *Ben, Max and Azmuth enter the Skipper* I wonder why they never used it in the original series..

[Sin 21]: *We see Malware's creation* So, Malware was created because Azmuth turned off the helix too soon? Way to go, Azmuth..

[Sin 22]: *We see the Mechamorphs turned into stone* Malware is a jerk to his own species.

[Sin 23]: *Ben transforms into Heatblast* Seriously? Why does 10 year old Heatblast have his Ultimate Alien appearance? ._.

[Sin 24]: *Albedo talks about how smart he is* Albedo, Albedo...Haven't you learned the moral of the story yet? Don't. Tick off. Malware.

[Sin 25]: Heatblast: I'm just getting warmed up. Get it? Heatblast? Warm? Narrator: 1. Malware doesn't know your name. 2. All these puns hurt my grey matter!

[Sin 26]: Albedo: Even Azmuth couldn't solve that under these conditions. Narrator, sighing: I prefer the present day Albedo way more. This one is just annoying.

[Sin 27]: Ben, to Albedo: You are really getting on my nerves, guy. Narrator: Oh Ben, if only you knew...

[Sin 28]: Malware: Upgrade...complete! Narrator: That's the best line you could find? Really?

[Sin 29]: Malware: I am superior! Narrator: Hey, hey, hey! I forbid you from using that word!

[Sin 30]: *Ben transforms into Cannonbolt* Are you freaking kidding me? Why does Cannonbolt have his Omnitrix symbol on his chest? Did the OV crew check the episode before releasing it?

[Sin 31]: *Cannonbolt uncurls from his ball form* Cannonbolt lacks his back shell.

[Sin 32]: *Malware attempts to absorb the Omnitrix* Okay, I thought the error about the Omnitrix placement would be brief, but this is ridiculous...

[Sin 33]: *Cannonbolt reverts* Not to mention that the Omnitrix is ALWAYS green, even when it times out.

[Sin 34]: *Malware blasts the ceiling, causing debris to fall on Ben* That shot should have killed him or severely wound him.

[Sin 35]: *Diamondhead emerges from the debris* I am starting to think they totally forgot about recharge mode or something.

[Sin 36]: *Diamondhead encases Malware in crystal* That is a very useful move. Why didn't he used it in the original series?

[Sin 37]: *The Galvans greet Ben and co. farewell* Derrick J. Wyatt cameo.

[Sin 38]: *Khyber copies the helix files* It is highly improbable that the ENTIRE flashback had been recorded.

[Sin 39]: Khyber lacks the Nemetrix symbol from his chest for a moment.

[Sin 40]: It is also highly unlikely that absolutely no one entered the room while Khyber was in. What happened to the security cameras? Or any other security measures?

[Sin 41]: *End Credits play*

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Total Sin Count: 41[]

Sentence: ABSORBED BY MALWARE[]

                  (Because you ticked him off)