no he just wants wet dong
Anyways, let me clear up a few things since I figured it might come across cringy when I was submitting it; the girl is a plot point, not a main character or even a gigantic part of the series; more of a way to get things moving. The bigger plot is fighting the villain. Looking back at it, what I put as the synopsis might be more suited as an origin; but whatever I will probably change it when I stop being so god damn lazy eventually. Reading it, it seems like a chick flick; just hold in there guys I promise I'm not re-writing The Notebook
also
Is it your writing
how did you figure out the villain when i haven't even revealed it; did i forget to make my google docs private????
alright guys time to cancel the series since Sol predicted all of it
>that synopsis
Aldnoah Zero 2 sounds great.
PokeRob wrote:
the girl is a plot point, not a main character or even a gigantic part of the series
Good to know this series has already failed the Bechdel test
Looks pretty neat. I'm confused though, will this be a romance fanfiction, (because you said the synopisis is probably better as an "origin story", which imo the synopisis makes it sound like a love story), because there's a war going on?