Denial has been released! More character bios are coming soon, I promise. Also, I decided not to make a trailer, sorry.
The next episode will be released in a week.
Here are four character bios, featuring Tuesday Smith, Ryan Thames, Nathan Loretta, and Penny Blair!
| WARNING: SPOILERS MAY FOLLOW The following information contains spoilers related to Attack on To'kustar through episode 1522. "Lightning". Please proceed with caution or leave the page if you do not wish to be spoiled. Click to collapse/expand box |
|---|
| Tuesday Smith | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
Tuesday is a major character in Attack on To'kustar. A 17 year old girl from Ateria, the city where the To'kustars return, she is a conflicted member of the Forever Knights. Her parents were killed three years ago, after which she joined the Knights in order to gain revenge on the man who killed them. However, she disagrees with many of the Knights beliefs and often opposes their operations. When the To'kustars return, Tuesday initially goes along with the Knights plan, but she betrays the organization shortly afterwards, defecting to the army. She joins a special military training program, acting as a special adviser to the trainees. Tuesday is indecisive, her only real motivation in the world being the need to be there for her younger sister Wendy. She is also rather insecure, and tries too hard to gain the trust of others, something which causes her to not be trusted by many. However, those who do trust her find her to be very committed to that trust.
|
| Ryan Thames | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
Ryan is a secondary character in Attack on To'kustar. He is the police chief of Teviv, the second-farthest southern city, only farther north than Ateria. When the To'kustars return and breach Wall Via and the wall surrounding Ateria, Ryan welcomes many of the residents of Ateria to his city. He joins a military training program as one of its leaders, and continues to serve the city as co-police chief along with Lawrence Carter. At times, Ryan is over trusting, which can prove problematic. However, his tendency too question his choices is matched by his intellect. He is willing to put the safety of others and the protection of his city above his own life.
|
| Nathan Loretta | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
Nathan is a major character in Attack on To'kustar. He is a member of the 12th Squad of the Regional Squad Corps, one of the five branches of the military. He is also an Esper, a mysterious powered individual. When the To'kustars breach the walls surrounding Ateria, Nathan and his squad arrive in the city, Nathan discovers that there is an Esper in the city. As part of evacuating the city, Nathan begins to help this Esper, Hadria Carter, understand her powers. As he tries to explain the situation, he ends up becoming an adviser to the military training program that she joins, all while trying to explain her mysterious powers and protect her for dark forces. Nathan is a very secret individual, not wanting any of his secrets to get out to others, and so he is very cautious when developing friendships and telling others anything. He is also very private about his life and doesn't like telling others his age, so very few people know how old he really is.
|
| Penny Blair | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
Penny is a major character in Attack on To'kustar. She is a member of the 1st Squad of the Regional Squad Corps, and as its leader, is given the title Knight of Percival. She is well known for being the strongest soldier in the army, and is very arrogant, always boasting about her strength. She is known to be very bossy, doesn't like to be bossed around herself, and she is known to not tolerate mistakes. However, she is also very loyal to the World Army, and as an Esper, loyal to Espers as well. When the To'kustars return, she eventually arrives in Teviv to handle the situation, and plans with the high council how to better address the situation. Though not officially a member, she works alongside the military training program in order to keep the city safe, while also helping the Espers in the city deal with the Knights.
|
Chapter 6 is now officially done, and ready to begin on Friday. The character bios I've been promising will be released later today and tomorrow, along with a chapter trailer tomorrow.
--Paper
CreeperDNA wrote:
Not exactly, I think Sonic Disk (Ben 10 Fan Fiction Wiki:Archive/Sonic Disk) is a pretty useless page considering there's literally nothing on the page except canon information. And then it was uselessly archived...
Comment - Can we just combine this discussion with the discussion for deleting the power list? It's the same thing honestly.
Scratch everything in the previous few posts. I said I was considering splitting the season one finale into two parts but ultimately decided against it; well, I changed my mind. The season finale is indeed two parts. I have moved some scenes around among the first five episodes and ultimately condensed them into four episodes. They will be named and released as follows:
As you can, most episodes are being delayed a week. Hopefully this will not happen again in the future. Also, because I have a few more days before I start releasing episodes again, I'm going to hold off on the bios I promised until tomorrow. Two a day Monday-Thursday.
One day this week I will release the chapter trailer. Again, I apologize for the delays. I will try to do a double episode at some point, maybe the season finale, maybe the season two premiere, or maybe something else, not entirely sure, but I'll certainly try.
--Paper
Brandon 10 wrote:
Comment - How would the Powers & Abilities category work? Would we have categories for different abilities and those would act as sub-categories for the Powers and Abilities one? For example: Aliens/Characters with Pryokinesis would go in the Pyrokinesis category which, in turn, would go into the Powers and Abilities category. If that's how it'll work then that might actually be better.
Yes
The eight character bios will be posted later. They will be for the following characters: Tuesday Smith, Ryan Thames, Nathan Loretta, Penny Blair, Vance Grace, Maxwell Wagner, Troy Dieter, and Pietro Czeswin.
For now, here are some Attack on Order updates.
| WARNING: SPOILERS MAY FOLLOW | ||
|---|---|---|
| The following contains spoilers related to the Attack on To'kustar season one finale. Please proceed with caution. | ||
| ||
|
Okay, bios will be posted tonight.
--Paper
This page seems altogether useless as it will never be completed. I propose we delete it. Having a category (called "Powers and abilities" or something) that we can put all the different powers and abilities categories into seems much more effective...
Make sure to vote using the voting templates:
Neutral - Reason (remain neutral)
Comment - Comment (suggest a change to the proposal)
I've been busy the last two days, which is why that there haven't been any updates, but I assure you I am still happily progressing in my writing. I will change my schedule slightly, however, to post eight more character bios tomorrow, and a trailer for the new chapter on Monday.
--Paper
Sorry, double post
Is the proper category Category:Metal Aliens or :Category:Metallic Aliens?
I only have one more episode to write before the first season is completely finished! This means I am well within schedule for release a trailer for Chapter 6 on Sunday, and for the chapter to begin releasing on Tuesday.
And here, have two more character bios: Noelle Williams and Lawrence Carter
| WARNING: SPOILERS MAY FOLLOW The following information contains spoilers related to Attack on To'kustar through episode 1522. "Lightning". Please proceed with caution or leave the page if you do not wish to be spoiled. Click to collapse/expand box |
|---|
| Noelle Williams | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
Noelle is a major character in Attack on To'kustar. She is a 13 year old girl from Ateria, the town where the To'kustars first return. When they break through the walls and get into the city, she is forced to flee. Noelle is very outspoken and kind, always wanting to solve problems when they arise. However, she often causes many problems of her own, and can be very argumentative if people do not agree with her. Occasionally, she can become flustered while arguing and turn from her normal, kind persona. At her school, she was in the same class as Sven Schmidt. Noelle is an only child, the daughter of Kevin and Molly, who spent their lives travelling the world before settling down in Ateria and having a daughter. After the To'kustars breach the wall surrounding the city, Noelle joins a military training program with several other children in his town and Teviv.
|
| Lawrence Carter | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
Lawrence is a major character in Attack on To'kustar. He is the 41 year old police chief of Ateria, and the father of Hadria Carter. Prior to the return of the To'kustars requiring him to flee the city, he had spent his whole life in the city. Lawrence is very rational, and can become quite angry over things he doesn't understand. He is well trained officer that takes pride in training the next generation of officers. He cares about nothing in the world more than his daughter, and will do anything he can to protect and make the world a better place for her. That has been difficult for him, however, ever since his wife was kidnapped by the Forever Knights three years ago. When the To'kustars return, Lawrence becomes the leader of a special team, training the children of Ateria to help fight back against the alien intruders.
|
There's a lot going on in the final chapter of season one! To'kustars! Forever Knights! Espers! The drama hits an all time high, when Attack on Order begins next Tuesday with Denial!
For today, however, you can have two more character bios: Lily Scott and Teru Hikami.
| WARNING: SPOILERS MAY FOLLOW The following information contains spoilers related to Attack on To'kustar through episode 1522. "Lightning". Please proceed with caution or leave the page if you do not wish to be spoiled. Click to collapse/expand box |
|---|
| Lily Scott | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
Lily is a major character in Attack on To'kustar. She is a 15 year old girl from Ateria, the town where the To'kustars first return. When they break through the walls and get into the city, she is forced to flee. Lily is very shy and often tries to get out of situations where she has to express her feelings. However, she can get very emotional about things that she is passionate about, or around people that she cares about. She is rather introverted and prefers to be alone, but that doesn't stop her from having a few close friends. At her school, she was in the same class as Michael James, and also became good friends with Hadria Carter. Lily is an only child, and was raised by her parents Graham and Kerry, both of whom lived their whole lives in Ateria. After the To'kustars breach the wall surrounding the city, Lily joins a military training program with several other children in his town and Teviv.
|
| Teru Hikami | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
Teru is a major character in Attack on To'kustar. He is the 14 year old son of Soichiro and Naomi Hikami, and the older brother of Mikoto. Teru also grew up alongside his close friend Michael James, who was orphaned at the age of two. At times, Teru can be a bit of a bully, putting himself before others for humor or selfish means. However, deep down, Teru can be very serious, and often thinks the most clearly when he can have fun at the same time. Teru tends to try and dominate social situations, but he is slowly learning not to be as demanding. With Michael and his family, he lived in Ateria for his whole life until the To'kustars returned. After this, Teru joins a military training program with several other children in his town and Teviv. Training with the military helps Teru to realize that his greatest strength is his intelligence, which makes up for his tendencies to do what is funny instead of what is right. Nonetheless, Teru is a straight shooter, who isn't afraid to tell people what he thinks, even if it might cause a disagreement.
|
I should probably make a thread about this before I go any further with it. A while back, like, several years ago (we're talking like 2013) back when I was an admin, I used to create shortcut pages like "BTFF:CG" that make it easier to get to rules and other non-mainspace pages. For instance, "BTFF:CG" currently redirects to Ben 10 Fan Fiction Wiki:Community Guidelines. There are many others currently like BTFF:ACC, BTFF:FC, and BTFF:UGNU. The point is that it might be hard to remember the exact url of a page, and finding a rules page like that can be somewhat inconvenient, but if you remember the shortcut, you can get there much more easily. There can also be a page that lists the shortcuts (BTFF:QL).
Basically I want to know what people think of these. Is this a thing that the wiki needs?
Make sure to vote using the voting templates:
Neutral - Reason (remain neutral)
Comment - Comment (suggest a change to the proposal)
Support will mean you want shortcuts to exist and oppose will mean you don't think they're necessary. Sorry if non-admins aren't supposed to create these types of threads, I couldn't find anything in the rules that says you can't, so...
Today's update has a lot of content but not a lot of announcements. Firstly, voice actors. Take them with a grain of salt because I might change them, but I've decided to give every character an actor who would voice them, because I feel like it. If you disagree with me and think I've made a bad choice for a certain character
Secondly, a sneak peak of Denial, which will premiere one week from today. The sneak peak will include the previously section, the credits, including --VOICE ACTORS-- and a bit of the first scene of the episode. I may release another sneak peak of a different part of the episode as it gets closer to next week.
Finally, two characters bios, as promised: Michael James and Arik Iverson
| WARNING: SPOILERS MAY FOLLOW The following information contains spoilers related to Attack on To'kustar through episode 1522. "Lightning". Please proceed with caution or leave the page if you do not wish to be spoiled. Click to collapse/expand box |
|---|
| Michael James | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
Michael is a major character in Attack on To'kustar. He is a 15 year old boy from Ateria, the town where the To'kustars first return. When they break through the walls and get into the city, he is forced to flee. Michael tries his very best to be friendly to those around him, and goes out of his way to stop arguments before they turn into fights. When he was two years old, his father was arrested after murdering his mother, so he was raised for the previous 13 years by the family of his good friend, Teru Hikami. He is extremely extroverted and patient, though when put into certain situations with people he is very comfortable around, he can be more open about his personal thoughts and feelings. He tends to assume the best out of people, and never thinks that someone would be capable of doing something other than pure good until it has already happened. For this reason, he can be overeager and too trusting, which may prove to be problematic in a world where betrayal and deception seem to be common tactics. After the To'kustars breach the wall surrounding the city, Michael joins a military training program with several other children in his town and Teviv.
|
| Arik Iverson | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
Arik is a major character in Attack on To'kustar. He the 14 year old daughter of Ben Iverson and Yolanda Iverson, the former of whom was one of the few people to travel outside Wall Via. Unfortunately, Ben was was killed many years ago, leaving behind only his journal for his son's viewing. Following his father's death, Arik was raised by his mother, who tried to spend more time at home in Ateria, despite her job in the capital working for the government. Due to his difficult upbringing, Arik tends to be more reserved and shy in social situations. Despite this, he is good friends with Sven Schmidt, who is the only person with whom Arik is willing to talk to about and show his father's journal. After the To'kustars breach the wall surrounding the city, Arik joins a military training program with several other children in his town and Teviv. As the training begins, he begins to open up to his fear of To'kustars and the unknown, realizing that he can use his intellect to make up for his deficits in physical strength. Perhaps the smartest of the children who flee Ateria, Arik uses his smarts to aid him in combat, making him overall just as strong as his teammates.
|
Today's update has some major announcements concerning season two. I'm currently going through a major revision process of my plan for the season. While this will not delay the start of the season or any of its episodes, it does drastically change what I had announced in terms of chapters. The titles of the chapters will all change. I am also abandoning the Espers of the Heart subtitle for the season, and chapters will no longer all be named similarly within a season.
I can also confirm that season two will contains six chapters and a total of 24 episodes. The six chapters are:
No character bios today. I will post the next two tomorrow, along with any other news.
--Paper
As promised, here is the next update!
On Tuesday, I will release a sneak peak for Denial, as it will be released one week after that. Then, on Sunday, I will release a trailer for Chapter 6.
Finally, here are the first two character bios I talked about: Sven Schmidt and Hadria Carter.
| WARNING: SPOILERS MAY FOLLOW The following information contains spoilers related to Attack on To'kustar through episode 1522. "Lightning". Please proceed with caution or leave the page if you do not wish to be spoiled. Click to collapse/expand box |
|---|
| Sven Schmidt | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
Sven is one of the main characters of Attack on To'kustar. He is a 13 year old boy from Ateria, the town where the To'kustars first return. When they break through the walls and get into the city, he is forced to flee. Sven has a strong will and a desire to do things in his own way, which cause him to have passionate anger against the To'kustars which threaten humanity. His goal in life is to explore beyond the walls, despite the wishes of his family. After the To'kustars returned, he took his first step towards his goal, by joining a military training program for several teenagers in Ateria and Teviv. However, things took an unexpected turn when Sven discovered a mysterious device at a Forever Knights base, which allows him to transform into a To'kustar. Now, while still unsure of how to control his newfound power, he uses it to help the army fight back against the To'kustars and the Forever Knights.
|
| Hadria Carter | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
Hadria is one of the main characters of Attack on To'kustar. She the 14 year old daughter of Aterian police chief Lawrence Carter. Raised solely by her father after her mother was kidnapped by the Forever Knights a few years prior to the start of the series, Hadria has had very few interactions with many of the other children in her town, causing her to become independent, but also arrogant. After the To'kustars breach the wall surrounding the city, Hadria joins a military training program with several other children in her town and Teviv. As she prepares for training though, she soon learns that she is not like the other kids in more ways than one: she is an Esper, having mysterious powers that she has still yet to discover. As she continues to train, she begins to seek out the answers to many questions, some of which do not have a simple answer.
|