Board Thread:Creators' Hub/@comment-28063203-20160531210855

I know there are many Ben 10 Reboots out there, but I promise I'm fully dedicated and willing to put my all into one. I had plans for a Ben 10 Reboot for a while, so I think it's time to show you guys a prompt of what it'd look like. Do you think I should? Please tell why.

Here's my prompt:

[The camera is following Ben who is chasing after a shooting starn the middle of a forest. It's dark outside, the bright stars illuminating the forest. Ben arrives at the shooting star site - which is revealed to be a crash site, viewing a small container-like orb in the middle of the crash site. The ground is shaking, Ben now falling off the edges of the crater and into it.]

[Ben]: (Curious) What is that?

[The camera focuses on the mysterious orb for a few seconds, returning to Ben who is reaching towards the orb. The camera focuses on the orb which opens up, revealing a watch. The watch latches onto Ben's wrist.]

[Ben]: (Smiles) Cool.. What's a watch doing in outer space?

[The camera is now focusing on the watch. The watch is slightly complex, with a large hourglass symbol on it. The hourglass symbol has a humanoid figure on it as an icon. Ben turns the watch's core which reacts by it popping out. Curious, Ben pokes it. After doing this, Ben's figure changes shape. Magma starts to replace Ben's skin, with dark red and brown rocks forming on his new hot skin. Ben's new form grows a few inches.]

[Ben/Alien Form]: Ahh! My hands are on fire!

[Ben's voice is now slightly raspier and deeper. The camera turns to show Gwen who had just arrived at the scene.]

[Gwen]: (Shocked) Grandpa Max better get the fire extingusher. (Takes off running to the Rust Bucket)

[The camera goes back to Ben who's facial expression gives off a relaxed expression.]

[Ben/Alien Form]: Really, Gwen? I know I'm hot and all, but did you have to run away? (Goes off to find Gwen)

So how did you like it? Do you suggest me to start my series? It took me a long time to research character interactions, make their dialogues realistic, and also to give a lot of detail about the setting and other things. 