Board Thread:Series Discussion/@comment-6883075-20170112234300/@comment-1824169-20170117030732

>That plot synopsis

Not even one sentence in and Pretentious Semicolon Syndrome has already reared its ugly head. Okay Goddammit That's not "ordinary" Okay GODDAMMIT Okay, a newbie soldier story. Might be interesti-  GODDAMMIT  Well good to know his entire motivation isn't just getting his dong wet then Is it your writing
 * there is a boy; a boy named Christopher.
 * He's pretty ordinary
 * (at least he thought)
 * Always having been what some kids would have called a "total player"
 * he never would have thought that a girl could make such a big difference in his life
 * until he falls in love
 * at least he thinks
 * His life is basically flipped upside down as he decides to join the Earth's forces
 * in order to impress her
 * and help save his own planet
 * from one of the most dangerous lifeforms known to man.