Thread:Paperluigi ttyd/@comment-4527566-20120412112525/@comment-4139585-20120412113401

everything:

one of the basic things i saw, was the format, a few words of advice on that:


 * start a new line every time some one else is going to talk, when the non-dialogue is either unconnected with the previous dialogue, or part of the non-dialogue after it.
 * Anytime some new is going to be talking, even if the only text in the paragraph before the dialogue is non-dialogue, you always want to start a new line.
 * also, if you aren't going to right a full script, you probably don't want to have text, in this case, just start a new paragraph when appropriate

I can give you some more help once you have done this