Thread:UltiVerse/@comment-24335793-20160828072218/@comment-5486221-20160828072919

Okay, I just did. Pretty good, it has potential, but you should let things flesh out a bit, if it means making the episode longer. It'd be worth it. For example, there should've been more content between the metorite crash and the test. There are also a few word errors here and there.