Talk:Mark III: A New Dawn/@comment-24922135-20161007165021

I have two things I feel worth mentioning:
 * 1) commas are supposed to have a space after them eg. "I like parks, they are fun" not "I like parks,they are fun"
 * 2) I don't get the Manzardill's name. 'Arctaraptor'. Arctic + Raptor, I get that. But Polar Manzardill's are nothing like raptors, he's closer to an iguana. Then again, 'Arctiguana' was taken.