Talk:Requiem/@comment-24922135-20170504195445

I, don't, think, you, used, enough, commas.

Requiem is capable of travelling through shadows.

So can I. Unless you meant he can turn INTO shadows.

He can also become invisible, should the right conditions be present.

This is so generic that, yet again, I could do this IRL. For all I can tell from what you've put, those conditions require stabbing the eyes out of anybody present.

Requiem's body allows for him to frequently use stealth, instead of going right into battle.

This sentence means nothing. Anyone can use stealth and you haven't established a previous ability that would be known as 'stealth'. Unless becoming shadows is what you call stealth, in which case I should state that I didn't realise that was his power until I read that section the second time.