Talk:An Unbound Mistake/@comment-6883075-20160705165802

I think the episode has an overall interesting story and you tell it well. However, the sentences are kind of clunky, paragraphs are very short, and I'm wondering why the police didn't do anything about the giant monster. I'd understand not giving him credit for defeating the robbers, but surely they would try to apprehend it. The reason that never happened in the original Ben 10 is because Ben always had his stuff done before the police got there. The grammar could use some work as well, but don't let me fool ya, I'm no grammar wizard either :P