User blog:ChromastoneandTabby/Tech 10: Star Spirit PREVIEW: Not The Intended Use

A quick snippet of an episode from the upcoming series.

Preview
-[On the pursuing train]-

[Theodore]: “Crap, there’s a corner up ahead! We have to slow down, or we’ll derail!”

[Nova]: “We can’t slow down now! We’ll lose them!”

[Theodore]: “Well, do you have any other ideas?!”

[Nova]: *pauses to think* “Actually, yeah, I do! Quick, get to the back of the train, turn into Rolling Stone, and get ready to lift!”

[Theodore]: “...Why?”

[Nova]: “I’ll tell you when we get to the turn! Go!”

-[On the hijacked train]-

[Scorpio]: *grumbling* “Why does Orion need a weaponized train of all things?”

[Aquarius]: *driving the train* “No idea. Times like these, I figure it’s best to focus on what we’re going to end up getting out of all this.”

[Scorpio]: “It is a lot of money. What are you even going to spend it on?”

[Aquarius]: “I’m going to the country’s most prestigious marine biology college, getting a Doctorate, then investing in all the equipment I’ll need to live practically the rest of my life underwater.”

[Scorpio]: “It seems like there are more legitimate ways to get into college.”

[Aquarius]: “Okay, wise guy, what are you going to do with the money?”

[Scorpio]: “I’m going to go back to the orphanage I grew up in, find all the idiots that made my life hell as a kid, then hire professionals to follow them around and mock them until they’re too ashamed to show their faces in public ever again!”

[Aquarius]: “...You have issues.”

[Scorpio]: “But no regrets.”


 * A wild screeching sound is heard from behind their train, followed by a large metallic ‘thunk’.

[Aquarius]: “What in the world was that?!”

[Scorpio]: *looking out of their train’s back window* “Well, you’re probably not going to believe me if I tell you.”

[Aquarius]: “Why? What’s going on?”

[Scorpio]: “It looks like they’re-”

-[On the pursuing train]-


 * The train wildly careens sideways, its back wheels having been placed on the next track over.

[Nova]: *yelling excitedly* “MULTI-TRACK DRIFTING!”

-{TO BE CONCLUDED}-

End Preview


Okay, so, I'm thinking about changing from the prose writing style of Rebooted to the more popular script style. What do you think? Would you prefer prose or script for this series?

Prose or Script? Prose Script