Thread:TJlive800/@comment-4952704-20141022010922

I don't think chat works out for us because neither of us can get on at the same time. And since you're doing this with Alienated: A Hero Reborn, lets talk here about my show. And remember, don't name drop the MAIN character. Any other is okay like Neil or Chelsea, just don't name drop the main character. This is supposed to be a surprise reveal show. But if we wanna name drop the name of the character or show, here are the codenames: ALP (series), Kevin (character).

I'm honestly jealous of HoE, and i could use your help to make ALP better than whats already planned. Here is what i got for you.

Neil. I don't want him to start out as a villain. I wanna make him kinda down to earth and nice guy, who is the closest thing to Ben on the show. He wasn't always a you know what (don't spoil), he was once a good person. I could use your help with him.

But the big stuff, this is what i need most. The Plumbers do exist in the universe, but as an earth organization, not space police. We have Galactic Enforcers for that. Brad, a Plumber agent is a detective. Throughout S1, he's after this murder case. I'll explain what it is:

A man was texting a woman some codes he found somewhere. This woman can decrypt the codes. But before he can hit "text", he was murdered by a man. The murdered man's body was taken, and was hidden. Though there was a blood trail, his body couldn't be found. The murderer then locked the front doors, and tried to escape from the balcony. A man and a woman broke down the door and pushed him off the balcony, killing him. The two left, but hours later, the woman visited. But an unspecified male was sitting in the apartment, trying to find the body. The man grabbed his gun and fired at the woman, who took cover. She also had a handgun, and the two got in a full on war. When the woman had one bullet left, she shot her own phone for un unspecified reason. The woman got up and surrendered, but she was shot. Then, another unspecified male who was seemingly friends with that murderer came in, and took her body away. He then shot his partner, and hid his body as well. No trail was found. The next day, Brad goes to investigate.

This case will play out through all the season, starting with ep 3. I need help with the following:

1. How should this connect to "Kevin"s main story?

2. What were the codes?

3. Why did he get murdered?

4. Why did the man and the woman murder the murderer? *Ik the identities of the man and the woman*

5. Why was the other man sitting in the apartment while the woman came in?

6. Who was the man sitting there?

7. Why did the woman shoot her phone? (I had the idea that it had the code encrypter).

8. Why did the partner shoot his own partner, and hide the bodies?

These details will span through possibly many eps, or just ep 3. But it should be most important! Please reply! And i'll reply some more stuff as well. 