Thread:CreeperDNA/@comment-29080086-20160910141725/@comment-24922135-20160910143319


 * 1) your grammar is objectively mediocre. Readable, but there is a lot left to be desired.
 * 2) good ideas still need to be woven into the story for them to work. Just because an idea is good, doesn't mean it fits. As I said on the Primal Forms page, if my ideas cannot be used contextually, they get sidelined or ignored.
 * 3) please be more mature. You were removed from the writing team because you kept bringing things up that weren't going to be used, welcome to the real world.