Talk:A great boring day/@comment-1824169-20160910002515

If I'm being perfectly honest, I don't like this episode. It hits almost every cliche opening episode note there is on the wiki, and the plot is sort of out-of-nowhere. I mean, I like Steven Universe, but why are there gems in this series? I'd argue there are ways a SU/Ben 10 crossover would work, but this doesn't really seem to do it all that well. They're just there because reasons.

Of course, the biggest and most glaring problem here is the grammar. It's pretty abysmal to be honest. The episode has no pacing at all, and while there aren't all that many spellign errors, the syntax and sentence structure itself is so confusing that it's hard to tell/care what's going on.

I admit the idea of the "opposite" aliens is kind of interesting (even if they aren't all really "opposite"), but this series has a long way to climb before I would consider it "good".

If you're interested, I do have a writing guide that might help you improve, and I'm always willing to answer any further questions you might have. I'm not criticizing you to be mean; I do want you to improve as a writer. The more good writers we have on the wiki, the better, and it's not like I started out all that great either.