Thread:Aaronbill3/@comment-33046708-20171027191902/@comment-24922135-20171027193850

The only thing I'd change is any time you say "she has x, y and z." I'd replace it with "she has x, y, and z". It's called an Oxford comma. Saying she has x, y and z implies she has X + (Y + Z), where as saying she has x, y, and z implies she has X + Y + Z.

In simpler terms; if you said you invited a fireman, a soldier, a policeman and a stripper to your house, it would imply the policeman was also a stripper. If you said you invited a fireman, a soldier, a policeman, and a stripper, it makes sure they are read as separate entities.

That was a lot of text to explain a minor grammar issue. The rest is good tho.