Talk:Pilot (Prototype: Genesis)/@comment-2251739-20150814012615

Nice! Was kinda hoping for more exposition of the overall plot, but no big deal. My favorite part was probably the dialog between Rashard and Mig. The descriptions of scenes are good, I could easily picture the scenes and fill in details in kind of a "cinematic" way I guess.

Images were well used too.

Only problems I can really see is some of the writing style is kinda unprofessional (mainly just the "KABOOM!!!!!" stuff) and there wasn't enough time to care about Milo, and Mig seemed to get attached to him really fast.

also when the voices were saying rashard i thought it was gonna actually be "richard" l0l