Board Thread:Series Discussion/@comment-27794032-20160329230014/@comment-24922135-20160330000908

I went back to the episode and fixed all of the grammar mistakes for you, as well as some formating issues. A few last minor things I noticed reading through it again:


 * Names should always start with capital letters. ALWAYS. (eg. Rook Blonko, the Plumbers, Ayden Matthews)


 * Whilst this isn't as important, sentences should also start with capital letters. This isn't as important though, as other factors (first word on the line, there was a full stop before it, etc) can help point out if a word is the start of a sentence.


 * Plumbers do not 'stop aliens' as Max says, they stop alien criminals. I haven't changed this for you, since I feel like this part you should re-word yourself, since this kind of affects the story and it is your story.