User blog comment:Ebomnitrix/E-10: Horizons Trailer (Special Preview)/@comment-28063203-20180528044133

The sneak peek so far is pretty decent! I like it, but there's a few things that I think could be fixed but I'll talk about the good so far.

The show has an interesting premise, and from what I can tell of the short scenes there's some pretty interesting stuff like Alice's dynamics with Ethan and Lieutanent Steel's story arc (since in the previous series he was hunting down Ethan actively, but here it looks like he'll be a sort of mentor).

I also really liked the "What the... Did I grab the wrong backpack?!" scene, it's a pretty funny idea to think about.

I do think some of the dialogue sounds cheesy and cliched, like the whole part where Ethan explains to Lieutanent Steel why he should use the Omnitrix for good. The bold text was also really awkward and out of place, it was vague enough that you could apply it to any genre and it'd work and it's just unnecessary in-general.

There's also this which feels awkward (I'm not sure if it's an out of context line, but the second sentence could've been formed better I think):

''[Ethan ran off and he accidentally ran into someone, again. Where this time, the person’s plate slammed right into their shirt.]''

Besides that, I am excited for it and I'll read it when it comes out.