Talk:Working on the Railroad/@comment-24922135-20170126154142

not sure if I'll have finished this episode by the time I post this comment, since I'm on limited time. If that part gets left in, then I didn't finish. I'll finish later. Either way I'm gonna do what I did last time and point out errors, or what I believe does not make sense. The word I'm looking for is 'feedback'.

Theo uses the StarTrix to transform into a plant-like, flowery alien name Broken Dream Boulevard

'name' should be 'named'. Also that's an incredibly in-your-face way of telling us which alien Theo is using, especially when you go to lengths to only name other characters as they name themselves/each other.

Gemini Yang: “When the two of us are close proximity,”

Gemini Yin: “We may as well be invincible!”

Not sure if that's just Yang messing up his grammar, but what he just said doesn't make sense even if it is only half of a sentence.

Okay judging by how Theo ensnares the two Gemini members, I can tell his powers are manipulating his arms into vines (or out of) as well as creating/manipulating plants that are not a part of himself. As such I question why he would bother to trap them with sunflowers, THEN trap them again but in his own vines. Couldn't he have done the vines first?