Talk:Quantum (Earth-32)/Dimension 1/@comment-24922135-20161006181656

It appears I never read the actual Species and Planet info portion of this page.

What a wonderful way to set out the information: in the form of a Galvan report! If I had one complaint, it is that the (presumably) formal report often hops between being a report and being a story. The way the "XLF-003.1" attack is described is a bit too descriptive and exact. Sure, the report should contain information like that, however not in the way it is presented. I feel like a report would be paced as:
 * establishing the third mission
 * describing the creature in brief
 * describing the attack with focus on losses
 * describing the return
 * retrospective analysis of the creature's attacks based on eye witness descriptions

Also I find it strange that a large portion of 'fluff' (the planet and species story) is placed in front of the useful information about the powers. Most pages tend to have the more important information like powers first.