Thread:Binkatong/@comment-3279837-20120209234503

Please try reading Tennyson Force. Tell me what parts I should improve on, other than the non-action more-romance parts, which I am working on in the later episodes. I know you don't really want to because of the Gwen thing, but she actually has most of the well-thought quotes in series and portrays an excellent strategest. (except the times she sends Kevin out, who for some reason allows fails) 