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Every writer needs some Constructive Critism, and now I truely feel that its about time I get some. I've been writing the same stuff for a while, but there's moments when you think: What am I doing wrong? Is there something I could work on?

So I want you BTFF to give me CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM on my writing. Just keep in mind that:

''Constructive criticism is the process of offering valid and well-reasoned opinions about the work of others, usually involving both positive and negative comments, in a friendly manner rather than an oppositional one. In collaborative work, this kind of criticism is often a valuable tool in raising and maintaining performance standards.''

Anyways, tell me what I need to work on, why I need to work on it, and please if you have any examples, link them. I really need this advice guys, I want to know if I'm doing anything wrong. 