User:ZeVikingSif/Fanon Con Writing Contest

<!--Hey everybody! This is my very first Writing Contest entry, and i hope you enjoy! I took some time and eventually realized what i could do. It took me about 10 minutes to think of what i wanted to do, but i eventually realized that i could base a character off a certain someone, and twist his life around just a little bit. I call this Penance: A Change That Counts (Don't ask where i got the title, i'm just very unoriginal.).

''The scene begins with a thunder storm in the sky. Rain is dripping down hard, and thunder is going off every 6 seconds. Police sirens are heard in the background, as the camera pans down to see 3 police cars rushing down a road. No buildings appear in sight. We follow the police cars through a highway as the sirens get louder and louder. The rain and thunder also become louder, as civilian vehicles drive out of the way. Suddenly, everything is slowed down. The rain, the sirens, the vehicles.... all become slow. The camera cuts to a suburban house, as everything is still slowed down. Sirens can still be heard in the distance. We then cut to inside the house, around the front door.''

''The house seemingly has no lights on, and is seemingly empty. We can see coat hangers filled with jackets, a rug, a stairway on the right, an opened room on the left, and all the way in the front is a lit kitchen. As the camera approaches the kitchen, shoe marks can be seen on the floor. On the wall, there appears to be a bloody handprint. As we enter the kitchen, we can slowly see several knives, spoons, forks, glasses, and plates being smashed on the floor. Blood stains can also be noticable on the smashed plates. All the way in front, we can see a table, with a knife place holder. All the knives can be seen in, except for one... ''

((Soundtrack hits 1:15 - 1:42)) 

''The camera swiftly moves to the left, as we see a broken dinner table on the floor, with the chairs being scattered and a flower pot is smashed. A yellow light can be seen on the ceiling. The camera continues forward, and to the left again, to which we see... a dead, bloody woman and a young man on his knees, with blood all over his hands and chest.''

((Soundtrack ends))

''The camera focuses on this young man, as his mouth and eyes wide open, and him seemingly tearing up. The camera then changes to a first person view, as this young man looks down at his dead mother. Her eyes and mouth also appear to be open, having a large stab wound in her stomach. She also appears to be still bleeding. A bloody knife is shown next to her corpse, as this young man grabs it. The camera then shifts back to a view of his face, as he's shown horrified and shaking. He starts to grip the knife, until he notices the blood all over his hands and knife. Thunder storms can be hard as well.''

''This young man starts to cry for a few seconds, and is heard saying "Oh god... oh god no... oh god...". Suddenly, the police sirens could be heard once again. Everything freezes in motion, this young man's eyes widen once more, and he starts to look behind him. The camera cuts to his hands holding the knife, now gripping it.''

''The scene then cuts to the outside of the house. The 3 police cars are, slowly, seen driving, in a line, over to the house. The rain is seen getting harder, as well as the thunder storms getting louder. The scene then cuts to 6 police officers breaking the door down, and running around the house. Two police officers went to the left, while another two went in front, and the last two go up the stairs. The camera switches between the officers in the kitchen and the officers upstairs, as they look around. The officers in the kitchen notice all the blood and smashed plates, while the officers upstairs enter the young man's bedroom, and notice a smashed laptop on the ground. And finally, the officers in the living room notice the dead mother's body. The young man and the knife has seemingly disappeared. The camera cuts to one police officer in particular. On his left chest, there's what appears to be a small badge with his last name, "Michaels".''

Michaels looks down at the body in horror, as he rushes over to it and pushes the fellow police officers away, and crouches down next to it

[Michaels]: No, no, no, no! Nora! Nora, talk to me! (Michaels starts shaking Nora's body) SOMEBODY GET AN AMBULANCE DOWN HERE! Nora... nora please, just wake up...

''Everything starts to go slow again, as the officer next to him looks down at the body and gulping. The scene then cuts to the outside, as more police cars and an ambulance is seen driving over to the house. Another thunder storm is heard as the screen turns black.''--->