Talk:Reckoning/@comment-5486221-20180903063414

While I enjoyed reading the episode, some of the dialogue didn't really click and seemed forced (the first scene, for example). You guys also used the word 'then' a lot, sometimes in consecutive sentences. Overall, I'm still excited for the upcoming episodes but I think you guys should take more time to go over the dialogue and stuff like that as previous episodes also had the same issues. It's just that it's more prevalent here.