User blog comment:Len Vennyson/I NEED HELP WITH SOMETHING/@comment-34285236-20120108203412

Though, I checked both of your episodes and I'm sorry to say this but your series is a failiure. Here are some tips:


 * 1) Try getting more toys. This is the main problem, out of all of them. You have less than 10 aliens I think and only about 5 villains. You don't even have Ben. Since you have Diamond Head, shouldn't you use X-Ray Ben that comes with it? I'm a big Ben 10 toy collector, and I don't even have the toy series I posted on Youtube (though, in reility, I have 3 currently [Ben 10: Ultimate X {Ben, Gwen, and Kevin fighting evil}; Andromeda Academy {The 5 adromeda aliens try to become plumbers under the new Magister Alan}; The Super Duper Luper Alien Show {A comedy about aliens doing stuff}; and My Life as a Tiny Way Big {Way Big gets small and he needs how of many other aliens to assist}]).
 * 2) Get better quality. More pixels.
 * 3) Try moving the scenery to diffrent locations. You're all in one area.
 * 4) Make the plot seem to make more sense. You can't have villains just feel like wanting to destroy Ben Tennyson. You have to make it seem relistic, make the plot have the readers get confused. Sometimes, the heroes don't always win. Sometimes, a character dies. You have to make it interesting, think and solve, "what plot would get the readers to be interested?"