Thread:Ahmad15/@comment-25064996-20140707025130/@comment-4897796-20140707113604

Hey, Harry, for episode 2 of Pyke 10, how about this, a better version of the plot?

"Pyke and Argit are watching TV in Pyke's home. The "I TV News" reveals that there was a big crater in the Major Mountain Forest. Pyke gets angry, kicks the door and runs fast. Argit tries to stop him but fails. After it, a red alien attacks Pyke with water blasts. Pyke is hit, and falls down, hurt. Argit runs infront of Pyke and attacks the red alien. But, because Argit's spikes are very weak, the red alien attacks him and defeated him. Pyke selects Army Rex but fails, transforming into Crystalio instead. He jumps high and punches the red alien into the roof. Hurting the red alien, Argit jumps onto the roof. He sees Pyke holding the right foot of the red alien. Argit asks the red alien what's his name. But, the red alien kicks Pyke on towards Argit causing them to fall off the roof towards the floor together. Afte a while fighting, Pyke uses his Universal Speech Translator on the red alien. He reveals that his name is Bivalvan, an Orishan. Pyke reverts and asks him where he lives. Bivalvan tries to tell, only to be interruped by a monster named Dr. Viktor. Dr. Viktor attacks them but Bivalvan uses his bubble shield and deflects Dr.Viktor's attack backs to him. A ship lands suddenly lands. Leaving the ship, Aggregor shoots Bivalvan. Pyke turns angry and transforms into Rakshiasa (although he had selected Army Rex's hologram). Rakshiasa swiftly kicks Aggregor fifteen times in 2 seconds. He then punches Aggregor swiftly with Rakshiasa's blades five times in a single second. Dr. Viktor attacks Rakshiasa, successfully learning what Rakshiasa's is weakness. Rakshiasa reverts, and Argit attacks Dr. Viktor with the spikes, knocking him out. Unbeknownest to them, Aggregor captures Bivalvan, and his ship flies away. Upon realizing, Pyke transforms into Fly-fly and tries to follow them, only to be electrocuted by Dr. Viktor. Pyke tries using Crystalio in an offscreen transformation for the second time but fails, like the rest."

Tell me, and I'll add it if you want.