Thread:Paperluigi ttyd/@comment-4527566-20120412112525/@comment-4139585-20120412120723

not the third one rob, because i use dialogue

besides, bink and roads both use a similar format but bink is more detailed with camera direction and roads uses a past tense (his are a lot shorter too)

@Jaakor: there really is no right way to write a story, but there is a wrong way, i suggest that you follow any of those tips that you think are good tips