Talk:At Azmuth's College/Episodes/@comment-26089094-20190418162723

You forgot the h in eightieth.

I guess the spelling errors are a site thing instead of tablet? Or it could be an organ mistake. We all make those.

I'm rambling again. Azmuth College sounds cool!

(Are these episode lists? I'm not going to EDIT your fanfic and I see great potential in this. You may need to sweep a few things but it's nothing distracting.)

Alien School : Perfect.

New To College? : Quality dips when Albedo is suddenly mentioned and takes a nosedive with Ben 10K. Split your character's story and Albedo's story into two pieces under the same episode.

"Everyone was warned about Albedo's temper beforehand, so I called Ben 10K immediately. While the students held their ground as Shocksquatch and Fourarms, Ben arrived on scene as XLR8 and didn't hesitate to change into Gravattack, holding Albedo in the air and redirecting his attacks. Albedo didn't accept defeat but he eventually calmed down."

Adromeda Problems: I find it hard to believe Ben or Azmuth didn't already scan every life form in the area. This new guy better be super cool! Oh! Maybe Albedo has a limiter on him? He doesn't need the Ultimatrix to transform, just evolve. Maybe Albedo is slowly removing the limiter, seeing what aliens he can morph into without being blocked? Maybe his endgame is to achieve his Ultimate Forms again?