Talk:Accusations/@comment-5486221-20181019025523/@comment-3441048-20181019050549

I'll admit when I was writing it, I thought it would be a pretty unique episode actually- compared to the others anyways- but I can see what you mean when it comes to the unnatural dialogue between the Cabal and the relationship feeling rushed. I wanna say that the Cabal members aren't meant to sound natural when talking to each other, as they're just working together and clearly holding back some hostile feelings against each other, but I feel like you meant that in a different way. Didn't think the profanity was too bad but just re-reading one scene alone and yeah, now I see what you're talking about. I'll try and go for something less formulaic and keep working on the dialogue for the next episode but thanks for the critique, it helps to see where things need improving and what to keep around.