Talk:Monider's revenge/@comment-5808884-20160912173815

Alright, here are my thoughts on this:
 * Using a meme as a plot is a very, very bad idea. The episode feels bizarre and out of place, not to mention that Harambe as a meme is fading right now, so it's not even relevant.
 * Gorillas are apes, not monkeys.
 * Merely changing Harambe's name to "Rambe" does not make him a new character in the slightest. That is, when you actually name him Rambe and not straight up Harambe.
 * Your view on the event is extremely biased, with mentioning an "evil zookeeper" and that Ha Rambe was trying to "protect the child".
 * Is Gerry Levin (really) Mike's uncle or grandfather?
 * XRL8 ice powers make no sense. He should be slow, like SlowTrack.
 * Since Monider is a ghost, none of the attacks should have affected him.
 * No explanation whatsoever on how the apes became ghosts. (that's when you should have used exposition)
 * Grammar and syntax still need work.