Ancy's Mistake/Lone Crittic Review

The following is a reivew for the Ren X episode Ancy's Mistake provided by The Lone Crittic

Review
Well... first of all when I started the episode it seemed a bit weak, the begining seemed too slow and it wasn't as funny as the rest of the episode.

When the episode progressed it was noticable that the show is one of the plot relies on puns kind of episode. As the episode went on it seemed to be really a comedic king kind of episode.

The villan was super funny and the number of twists at the end added a great plot element mixed with hillarious non-stop laughs.

The biggest con I noticed in the episode is that the only super powers used were Denica's time powers and Dr Pepper's powers. No alien turning was included, removing a major element of Ben 10 episodes.

Summary
The epsiode is mostly non-stop laughs with a few smartly put story twists making the reader want to read to the end. While it's missing aliens and the begining isn't to promising, Ancy's mistake seems like a really good episode getting a 9.2. I'm totally becoming a fan! Keep on the good work!http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120207132542/ben10fanfiction/images/3/3c/Tard.png