Talk:When It Started/@comment-28716546-20170401000258/@comment-5456782-20170401002850

>space in front of every new paragraph is really annoying

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Indentation_(typesetting)

>And it's already like Ben 10

Valid point, I didn't consider how similar the dogfight was but yeah, it's really similar in retrospect

Don't worry though, aside from the Omnitrix, aliens, Osmosians and other stufff, this isn't really that much Ben 10-like.

>Noice Emotes for Red Matter

the only art i can do good :-)

>Au contraire

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ke_AkJC92IA this the reference

>Letterbomb

yeah that's actually a good plot hole that you just pointed out

let me just

bs my way out of this one

the captain used yes-man

because his name is six letters

and very short to say, so it took less seconds to kill szilard

ANYWAYS thanks dude