Talk:Fear (Earth-404)/@comment-3074300-20150121162323

Since reviewing episodes is a thing now (both Street and Sif are doing it) I guess I'll drop my two cents as well.

But before that, a little trivia. Basically, this is probably the only show on BTFF I actually read at the moment because every single other one I read is too generic. I'm not a fan of Ben 10 sequels such as Heroes of Evolution (no offense to TJ or anyone, just my personal honest opinion) and most other series I've read have things that put me off about them. This one, however, doesn't.

Although I don't get what's with Paper making shows based on other shows (Young Plumbers based on Young Justice and Attack on To'kustar being based on Attack on Titan), that's not exactly a bad thing. I'm not a huge fan of Young Plumbers, to be honest, but this one has something interesting in it, mainly the suspense you get. The same suspense you would get while reading/watching the actual Attack on Titan. But somehow, I don't know why, the series differ. Paper managed to pull this off nicely. The first two episodes were very interesting and leaves you with a lot of questions and speculation, the storyline is already kicking off nicely, even though we've barely seen any of it. Something which I fail to do in my own series is add a lot of side characters, both good and bad. Here we have a lot of character groups (The Forever Knights, The Police, Sven's Friends) which we can't be sure of who is good or who is bad, apart from Sven and his friends obviously. The To'kustar battle scene and outcome left me filled with speculation, but I can wait to see how it ends.

Overall, it's awesome. My only complaint would have to be that considering this only comes out every other week (for now), one would think the episodes would be longer. Now, I know Paper also works on Earth-19, but in my honest opinion, episodes need to be at least 50% longer than this. Not a necessary factor, but the only thing I have issues with. The rest, the story, dialogue, characters and action scenes I'm perfectly fine with. Also, I love how you use profanity. It adds more realism, the same one Attack on Titan adds. My rating: 7/10. Those 3... sorry, but the length of the episode matters to me. Still, apart from that, everything else is cool. Keep up the work!