Thread:ChromastoneandTabby/@comment-6883075-20151108190343/@comment-1824169-20151109004459

It's decent for a first shot, but there are a few things to keep in mind while using Looplabs, or really, just making music in general.

Towards the beginning, it's exceedingly clustered and hard to follow, since the beats don't really match up. Try to use sound samples with similar or identical BPM (Beats Per Minute) while layering them over each other. Switching up the tempo is perfectly fine, just so long as each section of the song uses matching BPM.

Another thing to keep in mind is the fade-in/fade-out. While you have the fade-out down, a song needs to start out relatively simple to provide better pacing. Think of it as a story structure; first you have the set-up, then the action, then the climax, and finally, the ending.

I don't think there's anything other than that to mention as far as the song goes, but I would recommend looking into music theory. You don't need to be an expert or anything, but understanding a bit of it can go a long way in helping to determine what sounds good.

I look forward to seeing what you'll create in the future!