Thread:Lego Master/@comment-2133523-20131112005712

As you might have seen, i am kinda getting desperate for some feedback on my series Operation: Flushout.

I am looking for someone to help evaluate what has already been posted up, what's good about it, what's bad about it, what needs improvement and what needs to just be left alone or dropped completely.

I really need this because i said to myself when i started writting this "I will not release an episode until i am 100% happy with it." Well, i have released the opening 3 parter, and now i am moving on to other episodes of the series. And i find that i can't release any episodes... Hell, i can't write them up, because i don't know if the main character traits i am developing are traits that people like or dislike, If i should move in a different direction with the characters.

All i am asking is for you to read through just the first 3 episodes and tell me what you really think. I can take critique, just so long as it is helpful "Your characters are not funny, and though i appreciate you trying to put a Morticia-Gomez-esque relationship between Jim and Kyzan, it really comes across as trying too hard." Something like that is helpful critique. I prefer that to something like "It was good."

Thanks. 