Talk:An Unbound Mistake/@comment-28063203-20160705171323

Wait, Thadd can punch a truck 48 feet? Was he in alien form because it didn't seem like it.. Like how do you punch a TRUCK 48 feet? Is Thadd suddenly Morgan Freeman?

This episode was pretty interesting. Grammar was a bit of an issue, though most of it isn't poorly written. The new writing style is a bit weird, a mix between dialogue and novel which kind of confuses me as Thadd speaks in dialogue and everyone else speaks in novel so I think it'd be easier if you balanced it a bit more. Overall this episode wasn't bad, though CaT did bring up the trope which while I do enjoy I think could've been better written in this situation.