Talk:Malware Returns/@comment-28063203-20170419212206

Already a grammatical error before the actual episode!

This episode was okay, this is a small nitpick but I felt like you could've utilized Malware better. I mean, he was destroyed in a fight by Ben or so it seemed but he's going after Azmuth? I understand Malware hates Azmuth, but when you almost die to someone I think you'd be a tad bit angrier at that other person.

"unmerges" isn't a word (unmerged is though), so you could reword the sentence to: "Upgrade shapeshifts his blaster into a hand" or something like that. And when Malware shouted "Where are you!" it should be a question mark or something like "?!" (though I'm not sure if that's gramatically correct the last one). Azmuth also says "Here I the plan" when he's talking about Cyberchase. Also, what happened to the punctuation with italics? At first you didn't use them then you used them, and now you're not?

Cyberchase felt like a cop-out in my opinion, Azmuth just has a convenient alien that just happened to be recently discovered and was powerful. If he was recently discovered (depending on the time such as days to months), I don't think Azmuth would know much about the Cyberspace such as him knowing the Ultimatrix uses more energy there. You could've used a Null Void projector, something that has a similar function, and maybe have made a scene with Ben in the Null Void and fights Malware until the characters help him escape.

Speaking of characters, besides Ben everyone else seems so bland and had not much personality especially compared to the canon. Gwen also had like only one or two lines and they were one words too. All of the other characters were almost entirely useless besides Ben and to an extent Azmuth who helped form a plan at least.

I know I may come off as harsh and/or rude when reviewing, but I don't mean to. There were a good few ideas in this episode (and the series in general), such as continuing on from what happened to Malware and making Malware seem like an unstoppable threat. The episode was fine and had lots of good ideas, it's just really a lot of the little stuff such as grammar and small details that need to be fixed.