Talk:The Hero/@comment-4969948-20161211031309

So yea I said I'd read this time and time again and I guess tonight's the night. It was a solid start; of course, this was made nearly a year ago, so you've improved I'm sure. It had a few duller moments and some lines were a bit repetitive but overall it had a really continous flow and hooked my interest. I like the disparity between Nova and Theo's characters; really sets them up as a pretty great duo later in the series.