The Dead Zone/Contest Review

Action: I thought there'd be much more action from espically you Jack, but the action was multiple paragraphs, and it was interesting. So, I'll give this category a 4.

Comedy: Very Dark Episode, with little humor in it. However, I did like one line. “Perhaps if you had some Earth fries chilified then you shall feel better". For adding that quote, I'm going to give you a 2.

Does it have Anur Transyl and Whampire: 5 points easily.

Storyline: Its a dark story of how Tennyson lands on Anur Transyl and is tricked by the Vampire lord, Lord Transyl to help out and fight. Though it never says it, I suspect that Transyl may have used his mind-controlling powers a bit. Also, why did the Transyilans kill Transyl? That just seemed Random. Ghostfreak was as cruel as ever, and I liked the idea of Anur Transyl being in war with Ghostfreak and the rest of the Anur System. I just didn't like that pep talk Ben got.

In the end, its a dark ending with no clear solution in sight, and that is perfect with the Anur System. So, I'll give the Storyline a 4.

15 Total.