Thread:Beastazoid/@comment-4588264-20150411194132/@comment-4674608-20160701045341

Ah, man, I need your writing expertise..I haven't posted that ep because I didn't feel good about the way I introduced Equinox, or the way I ended it..I left certain parts out, and I'm aching for a better ending..You think you can comment what you think on a WIP thing I'm posting on E20? Cause I'm going to continue Ch. 6 and 7 to get this ball rolling.