Thread:CreeperDNA/@comment-26544026-20160713000855/@comment-28716546-20160716082630

No offense, but it's WAY too rushed. First Ben and Kevin are going on a trip, then Kevin's car somehow catches on fire, then Sunder randomly attacks, then Ben goes to Galvan for no reason (it looks like Azmuth doesn't know that Ben's trix is broken) and suddenly he gets a new Omnitrix and suddenly hybrids attack.

I would've fleshed it out a lot more, making each part have a meaning and make it the length of an actual episode (yours is about 8 minutes long). For a full review submit this to CaT Reviews.

The things I do like are how the new Omnitrix has to scan DNA and doesn't just have most samples magically in each Omnitrix. And how you brought back the 'My Car' Gag