Talk:Road Trip (TNO)/@comment-24922135-20160909143916

Okay so a bit of criticism: using italics to differ between actions and speech is NOT helpful to the reader, as the italics effect isn't easily noticeable.

"Omnitrix: Alien DNA scan complete. New DNA unlocked. Galvan, Osmosian, and Revonnaghannder DNA samples acquired."

Kudos to whoever wrote that line, as that is worded exactly as I'd expect the omnitrix to speak.

"Omnitrix: Beeboo. Omnitrix is not working properly"..."Self-Destruct mode for 10 minutes."

And I want to shoot whoever wrote THAT line. I would expect it to bw written something like...

"Alert. Critical malfunction detected. Self Destruct countdown active at T- 10 minutes."