User blog:Binkatong/Ben 10: Eternal Forms

Finally finished Absolute Prison (Part 1). Holy Humongousaur that was hard. DX Hopefully I'll get better as I get used to the format.

So, just wanted to ask, what do people think of it so far? Any questions? Anything you particularly like? Any gaping plot holes? Anything I can do to make my writing better? I'll take compliments and criticism, as long as it's constructive. ^^