Talk:Precarious/@comment-4969948-20160324035024

Wow, Rob. I gotta say you really improved. This is the best episode you've written so far, I loved seeing the character development Mack went through, and he actually killed, wow, niceeeeeeee. And his mother is dead, that surprised me a bit, nice work there.

Overall, loved the episode. It felt a bit rushed at first, then it slowed down and was just right. Great episode man! :)

Oh and I noticed one error in "Plot" section. You put Alabama, Georgia, not Atlanta, lol.