Talk:The Hero/@comment-4952704-20161205213155

Not much to say but good pilot. It doesn't turn me away in the end and i'm intrigued to read more. A lot of the problems I have stem from the dialogue itself with a few repeating lines such as "Hold on a second" (within the same scene, no less) but that's a problem that exists in a lot of shows, including mine. Other dialogue problems I found was how forced some scenes felt, such as the opening when they start calling each other by name.

But other than that, solid pilot.