Talk:Time Heals: The Other Side/@comment-16747922-20140821043554

Man, this series is already excellent! I have yet to fully finish this episode but it was already so appealing, and you seem to know exactly where it's going! My pilot started with a basic story and wandered into improvisational territory until the second half, but yours is focused, authentic to the show, well-written, and very interesting! The descriptions are also very vivid and your vocabulary is impressive - things I sometimes have a tough time finding around the wiki.

For the ideas/tips, Big Chill would be nice and intimidating and would fit the tone of this story, but you could also include Goop, as well as Chromastone, whose color-oriented aesthetic side of his abilities serves as a nice match to the magic-themed story.

And a quick thing: Humungousaur is spelled "Humungousaur" and not "Humongasaur". TBH back in the old days I used to make the same mistake, but a quick heads-up, that's all.

Besides that, awesome work!