Talk:Tryelle/@comment-37393632-20200105200013/@comment-37393632-20200108123438

I understand it's fiction, but after all it seems just too unrealistic. I think this just needs minor changes, but nothing destracting. I mean, there never were Ben 10 Planets with large astronomical info, but the few things said were at lest believable from the point of view of astronomy.

I don't want to criticise, just a small insignificant head-up.