Talk:Jetray (Earth-83)/@comment-24922135-20161003005006

I feel like his arms should be longer, and his wings shouldn't have 'points' in the middle of them since that takes away from the hydrodynamic look of a manta ray. Those arms at their current length barely reach his hips, so I feel like they should stretch out more so that they look like the wings could feesibly fold under them. In his current design, it looks like if he puts his arms to rest by his side, there would be way too much loose wing for the arms size that would just sag.

As for what I like: I really like the head, which really does bring out his manta design. His body and legs have a nice flow to them, while the long legs and feet keep him looking alien. I like the wings apart from the 'point' in the middle of them. It feels like I've been really harsh to this redesign, but I actually really like it. It's just easier to point at what doesn't work, rather than what does.