Thread:Brandon 10/@comment-26264353-20191001200500/@comment-3441048-20191002023933

Ello! Just checked it out and yeah, I think the writing's good but I will admit that I was a bit confused at times when reading the episode.

Mostly 'cause I misunderstood the premise for the series as Vilgax going on a time traveling journey to rebuild Maltruant with the gang having to find a way to stop him from doing that so you can imagine my surprise when he did it in the first scene of the episode. And it did end a bit too abruptly for my liking especially with a big bad like Maltruant but I suppose you have plans with him being turned to stone and with Eon showing up.

I also think there should probably be a few more scenes added in to give the story some more depth like why did Maltruant suddenly go to Area 51 and maybe a scene where Kevin and Gwen discover said sightings and have to bring the news to Ben and Rook. It's a little extra but it could give the already existing scenes some more meaning. I'd work on the pacing just a bit too- I understand the characters are in a rush but the episode was over fairly quickly.

But all that being said, I'm still interested to see where this series is going. I hope my advice/critique helps out and wasn't too er- much.