Board Thread:Series Discussion/@comment-1824169-20160713024722/@comment-6883075-20160713030855

Introduction
I mean, it was as good as a 5 paragraph journal entry/episode could get :P I got a laugh out of the whole "Anyways, after a few seconds I totally did not spend in the fetal position, I went over to the pod and checked it out." thing.

Alien 2
Aaaand just like that, Psikick becomes the Humungosaur of Ultimatrix Unleashed. The whole thing on witty commentary was probably the highlight of the episode, but it didn't produce as big of a laugh as the fetal position thing. Albeit still short (since these are clearly basically journal entries), I liked how this one was a bit longer.

Alien 3
The "I hope this isn't indicitave of any patterns" thing is hilarious. I'm writing these as I read, so I haven't read much else of the entry, but I can pretty much assume this'll be the best line.

And the Psikick counter raises to three. It's also nice to know 11-year old Tech likes puns just as much as you do. Except it's not. Can't wait to read more of these tasty puns!

Alien 4
"You might as why I didn't just use Psikick". God damn it, CaT.

I love how Tech just calls everybody a punk basically, reminds me of me and my ironic self.

"Doesn't it all seem a bit... I don't know, convenient?" Well, yeah. That, or you have presumably TEN ALIENS and you still only know about four of them. That might explain how new aliens keep popping up for different situations.

Alien 5
"Considering Psikick probably doesn't have enough telekinetic power to lift a car". Is your goal literally to mention Psikick in every episode? Psikick = Humungosaur confirmed???

Another note; how does an 11-year old know so much about cars and car part names? I'm 14 and I don't know where half those things are located.

"''Toodle-loo!". ''Just thought I'd mention that. It's kind of weird to read a supposed to be menacing note that's topped off with that close.

Alien 6
Lmao that note gave me a good laugh this time around. I gotta say, CaT, I'm proud of you for not even mentioning Psikick in this episode. Good job!

"''I mean what even." ''definitely sounds like an 11-year old me trying to sound hip and cool.

Aliens 7, 8, and 9
Well, let me get this out of the way first. Your title has improper grammar. God damn it CaT, this is supposed to be a rewrite! You don't put a comma before the last entry in a list! It ought to be "Aliens 7, 8 and 9". But you do you, hun.

[Tech]: (is assaulted by fire beams)

[Tech]: (casually) whelp, just let me take my time and see if i've got somethin' to counter this

gg.

"Fighting global warming, one frozen mech at a time!" CaT I'M DYING PLEASE STOP

"''and... proceeded to give it a speech on how it's C02 emmissions were harming the environment." ''CaT I SAID STOP GOD DAMMIT, also it's CO2 not C02 you dumb nerd

This guys' notes are getting less entertaining every journal entry, at a rate almost of how downhill his insults are going with every note.

gg there is your reviews of every rewritten episode so far