Talk:Broken Family, Fixed Hero./@comment-4952704-20161008054015

Well... this isn't great. Mike's probably the best character in this. Your writing is way off and you're not that descriptive either, you just write dialogue without action. I don't mean action as in fighting, i meant it in a nothing happens that we know of way. Nothing really stands out here, nothing's challenged, the characters seem boring despite Mike's best line in the whole thing about cringe. Try proof reading your episodes.