Thread:UltiVerse/@comment-7503158-20140107110915

Hey, I know your cool new series about Gwen and Kevin and all, so I am here to suggest some plot. Here is yours... slightly edited.

Plot
(Scene 1: Saying Goodbye)

''Gwen and Kevin are saying their goodbyes to Ben. Zombozo is tied up near them.''

(Gwen): Take care of yourself, doofus.

(Ben): You too, dweeb.

''The two enter Kevin's car and drive off. Ben waves to them.''

(Zombozo): What a touching moment. Too bad you wouldn't have caught me all by your lonesome.

(Ben, walking towards him): Watch it, Zombozo. I don't need a team to get the job done.

A few metres away, Gwen looks back at where they left Ben.

(Kevin): You okay?

(Gwen): Yeah. I don't know. I don't think I can get used to not kicking alien butt after fighting for so long.

(Kevin): No one said we'd have to stop.

(Gwen): You're...You're right. In fact, I brought my Lucky Girl costume with me. I could be her when fighting!

(Kevin): Lucky Girl?

(Gwen): Oh, right. You were never around to see me dress up as Lucky Girl. It was six years ago. Hex fought us for the first time. One of his charms broke off, yada yada, I became Lucky Girl, fought bad guys for a day or so, destroyed a Hex's charms...That's pretty much the beginning of Lucky Girl.

(Kevin): Who and the what now?

(Gwen, facepalming): Nevermind, just keep driving...

END SCENE

(Scene 2: New City)

(We see Kevin's car passing by a sign saying "Welcome to Greensteel City!"

(Gwen): Well, here we are.

(Kevin): Soo... this is Greensteel City? Seems rather, wrecked.

(Gwen): Might have a few cracks here and there, but is better than Vilgax blowing things up everywhere.

(Kevin): Well, lets send you to colledge.

(They went back into the car as it drives away, while we see a black figure staring at them while they go)

???: Hmm... newbies aye?

TO BE WRITTEN

So what cha think? If you like it then use it, need ideas then message me.

See ya! 