Talk:This Is My Final Stand/@comment-4050367-20160713002336

“Apocalypse Earth?” Napoleon repeated. “Are you sure you didn’t just teleport us to Detroit?”

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Anyway, what an ending to Not Applicable. The return of The Jester (a fav of mine), the revelation of the Zenturi, and that ending between Napoleon and Herculian, as well as with Napoleon's mom. I'm glad that the Tech 10/Not Applicable crossover was acknowledged.

The one thing I kinda have an issue with is that I don't really think we got a whole lot of backstory on how these two came together, and that's kind of something I noticed in Season 1 of Tech 10: Rebooted as well. You start in media res of their stories, and while you kinda give hints of origin in the series, you don't go all-out to explain it to us. Like, I had no idea of knowing about Herculian working for Azmuth, that came out of nowhere for me. Maybe I just was reading too fast and ignored something that might have hinted at that, but yeah I kinda wish you would flesh things out more.

Then again, you said this was primarily to get better as a writer so I probably shouldn't complain too much. Alright, now for Season 2 of Tech 10.