Talk:Occult/@comment-24351229-20160829230930/@comment-6883075-20160829232315

Alright, so first and foremost, thank you very much for starting the series, and even more leaving feedback! It's really appreciated.

And yeah, I realize that the writing here was kinda chunky and in some places and times didn't go into enough detail. I think I fixed that a bit more in the newer episode but I've got a lot of practice to get in and feedback like this helps me emphasize on what I need to fix, so thanks.

Thinking back, that probably would've been a much cooler as well as better idea, yeah :P