Thread:ChromastoneandTabby/@comment-37396573-20181125032301/@comment-1824169-20181125155643

First thing's first, it doesn't seem like English is your first language. We have sister wikis in various languages that you might be more comfortable publishing on.

If you're determined to stick with the English-based wiki, then you'll have to brush up on your English skills. I recommend installing the free version of Grammarly and checking out their list of websites that might help improve your grammar.

As for your series itself, given that it's called Nocturno 10 and your username starts with Nocturno, I have to assume you're planning a self-insert series. Doing that isn't inherently bad, but it is looked down upon since most series with a self-insert main character tend to be full of cliches and amateurish writing. If you want to write a good self-insert series, you need to make it stand out from being just another Ben 10 clone. Think about what the audience can get out of your story that the original Ben 10 didn't provide, and try to expand upon that.

How far do you have your series planned? Are you still hammering down the premise, or are you decently far along in development?