Talk:Field Trip Day/@comment-24922135-20170316235012

Pretty decent for a first episode! Since this episode was clearly set up with little plot, I don't have much positive to say other than it was well written. Now for the constructive criticism:

Your grammar could use some work. On a few occasions you used 'your' instead of 'you're'. When you use that word just check that it cannot be replaced with 'you are'. If it can, use 'you're'. If it can't, 'your'.

ChamAlien's name should have the second 'a' capitalised.

the category 'Omniverse Sequels' is for series only, not episodes.

Keep up the good work!