Board Thread:Series Discussion/@comment-6883075-20170112234300/@comment-5456782-20170117033348

i'm going to paraphrase my rant here

this is ntohing against you rob and this is a shitty argument but

>plot point

>she's just a plotpoint

it's

2017 bro

that's a shitty blanket "blame" but whatever here we go

girls as plot points isn't really feasible, it's really dated and has been done for ages. i mean bro, it's the plot of like every 90's rpg/adventure. oh no something happened to the princess/beautiful girl!

it's even the plot to star wars.

it's nothing new and its starting to get stale, everywhere.

once again, this part was not really against you. its against shitty writers everywhere as a whole

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there are multiple ways i see this story starting off:

1. he wants to get his dong wet, so he sets off to impress her.

2. he actually connects with her.

follow that up with one of these:

a. she gets kidnapped

b. she ends up not liking him (and i swear if it does this, and she comes around in the end and is all "omg turns out i loved you all along xd" by the end of the story after he does heroic thing x i am going to be livid)

c. she ends up dead

like seriously bro if i predict this now you owe me a soda