User blog comment:ChromastoneandTabby/Fall Fanon Con Creative Writing Contest 2016 ~ Results!/@comment-28063203-20160929101239

Congrats Mig, it was really nice yours and had good pacing. This was probably intentional, but I like how you're in the mind of a murderer, first sad, then angry, then proud, etc.

And Alan, yours was really nice too! I'm not much of a poetry reader, but yours had a nice flow (minus the last "ha ha" laughs) and really great rhymes!

@CaT, I agree with the criticisms and flaws, and I admittedly made it in one hour so it wasn't as nice as it should've been. Ben killing off Vilgax in a random encounter was sort of bad, so I'll take this advice and rewrite it (just for fun). The Killing Joke reference.. I hated the movie but the comic was pretty cool, but I just liked that one line and thought it fit. I do agree that there wasn't enough weight on the whole situation, though. Thank you.