Talk:The tale of 2 gem/@comment-1824169-20160910171240

Well, the dialogue is at least formatted correctly this time around, but this still has the numerous grammar and syntax issues from the last episode. I don't mean to sound rude, but is English your first language? This seems like it was written by a ten year old.

The pacing is still terrible, and I swear to god if I see one more person use an emoticon in their episode text I am going to backhand them with force the likes of which have never been seen on this planet.