Thread:AwesomeIsMyName/@comment-4050367-20120408003744/@comment-14469071-20120412114105

Back from Europe. It was AWESOME. The episode was really great. You continued making perfect Roman stuff with Jupiter and more but there was 1 problem. George didn't really have a strong side on things. What I like to do in my writing style is instead of writing alot of quotes I focus more on what the characters think and not on what they say. Most people prefer to write stuff the way you do but KOTS needs the other writing style because I try to put in complicated character build and characterzation. I'm not saying you must do it but my episodes will probably differ in many ways from yours because of the writing style. Another problem is that George doesn't have the proper characterzation like in BTUA but thats ok since he is still a kid but in season 3 make him more like his BTUA self.

In overal you did great work on the roman part and it's pretty good. Keep it up.