Talk:Storm Among Us/@comment-24922135-20161022112517

honestly stopped reading shortly after grey arms showed up.

There was nothing in here that wasn't dialogue. Even movie scripts describe their environment and actions to higher levels of detail than this. The formatting was confusing and the fact that the characters were using writing crontractions in their dialogue really threw me out.

But for a second there you had me thinking you had written a really good song, it was impactful and even by just the lyrics I could tell the tune. But no. You just took that from someone else, albeit parodied to the benefit of a homosexual singer.