Thread:ChromastoneandTabby/@comment-1478058-20160412215704/@comment-1824169-20160412222351

Well, I ain't no sword expert, so I don't really have much to say about the design other than it looks a bit cluttered. Maybe you could try thinning down the lines?

On another note, what art program are you using? This looks more complex than Paint, but it doesn't look like you're using any tools to straighten your lines.