Talk:Re:Start/@comment-2251739-20171010102457

LIT

Seriously tho this was legitimately immersive to read. Probably partly because the Ben 10 characters/universe are more solid in my mind but you nailed writing them and it's fun as hell.

Only nitpick I have is memey parts ("Ben 10 fanbase") kinda bring down the immersion/engagement. Not a big deal though.

Looking forward to seeing you develop Ben out of his little shit OV phase.