Board Thread:Creators' Hub/@comment-28716546-20160619070800/@comment-28716546-20160619111241

Thank you, but I only put an extract from Episode 2 on, the rest will be uploaded either today or tomorrow.

I agree that it could be better, as this is my first series ever which is why I want feedback (geddit?). Aaronbill3 helped me with this by changing some of the things in the extract. I even have a post asking for more writers/co-writers.