Talk:The Watch That Changed Everything/@comment-28063203-20170706220538

The beginning scene of the episode involving the Weatherheads and Xylene reminded me of And Then There Were 10, (because it was based on it) but was done slightly differently so that was nice.

I noticed "His hands were in his jean pockets, he tooks hand out for a second to adjust his backpack," was rather awkward and had an error ("he tooks hand out", and the sudden switch to present tense (? I may be wrong on that part)).

I wonder what the object Sif had, and what was the tech the bullies had.

" The nerve of that douchebag, all I was doing was trying to help get those jackasses off him. Like what in fucks name does he give to act like that" Well that sentence had a lot of swear words.

Xylene crashing onto Earth and giving the Omnitrix to Ethan was also a nice change from And Then There Were 10.

In Diamondhead's transformation scene, "diamonds" was capitalized when it was after a comma. CTRL+F: " the background, Diamonds started".

The Agent can break the fourth wall and has a Tardis. He seems pretty interesting and could be a good comic relief character (if that's his purpose besides mentoring Ethan).

"Whoa, this place is really on fire… ". Captain Obvious! Tra-la-la-la!

"[The begins to slowly move out as the conversation continues.]" is also awkward. I think you might've meant, "They begin to slowly move out"?

The "[The Agent pulls out a clipboard from his jacket, lifts his leg, and breaks the clipboard in half by throwing it against his leg.]" seemed so "lol xD so random" to me.

I wonder who the final Weatherhead is. Hail-O wasn't in this episode, so maybe him? Or it could be an original Weatherhead like Atm-O and Humidit-O (who are both pretty cool too!).

Overall, this was pretty good! I enjoyed it a lot and can't wait for the second episode.