Talk:A New Enemy/@comment-29914778-20160909115419/@comment-24922135-20160909120029

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But I kinda agree with Primal, there is nothing really to go with here. I think the concept of 'the first conductoid' could be pretty interesting if done right, but without any actual episode to go on there isn't really anything to judge.

The summary boils down to Ben stopping someone from conquering/destroying the universe. Let's face it, he's been doing that since Alien Force so that alone isn't really a note worthy event in his life. If you actually wrote out an episode I could give you feedback on how good or bad it is, but as it stands it's just a generic plot outline. Honestly, an outline isn't even useful in terms of judging quality. You could have the best plot in the world, but if the episode is poorly written then that makes the story bad. You could have the most generic plot in the world, but if it's written in an interesting way then it could be very good.